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dont...

dont bite the hand,
that reaches out to you
in a display of affection
or of love thats true.

just because you may
have been hurt before
doesnt mean the next time
will be the same im sure

try to trust your feelings
let go and dont longer hold back
and then a new love will rekindle
the feelings you currently lack]

dont bite the hand,
that reaches out to you
in a display of affection
or of a new love thats true.

Author notes

ive currently got writers block this poem isnt very good i know that. but there was no point in giving up so i thought id try

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  • daviscth silver member
    January 11, 2008

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    I enjoyed this.Thank you for taking time out to post in my contest. Your entry is appreciated. All the best of luck to you at judging, Cathy