Something's behind me!
Stalked by a thunderbolt,
rattling windows
as it strikes
with the swift prescision
of an Electric Panther.
Don't know what hit me
until i hear rain on the roof.
Author notes
i was awake in the wee hours, when i heard this huge scary noise, like a truck hit the house or something. and then it started raining. i was like, "ohhh... it was thunder."
i need to know if this is cheesy or good. what do you think?
Comments
-
I think you should take the exclamation mark of the first line.
Adding your comment: