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[Loving from a distance]

Loving from a distance
Admiring from afar
And yet you haven’t got a clue
It’s really not that hard

You may not notice me right now
Which isn’t a surprise
But I have certainly noticed you
And the sparkle in your eyes

I thought I made it obvious
About how much I care
But somehow you don’t see me
Even though I’m always there

The way you move when you walk by
Gives me a sudden thrill
You may not feel the same way now
But I hope someday you will

I just want a single chance
To love you for all time
So listen to me when I say
How much I want you mine

Something random. I don't know.

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  • whyiamialone911
    January 11, 2008

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    This is really good
    You described me perfectly lol
    I like the rhyming, it really fits
    Nice job for " something random"