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"Nobody Wins!"

It's time once again for elections
When poor voters must make selections
Pols talk sweet as honey
To control the money
That flows from our damn tax collections

The results of political sins?
When the counting of all votes begins
The count that's most true
More folks don't vote than do
So the real math says "Nobody" wins!




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  • blind alley
    January 13
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    haha. that makes sense.


  • Amera gold member
    January 11

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    This Limerick is pure truth. I love it and I'm glad you said it. Their all bastards.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • ellipsist
    January 11

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    I must admit that I agree...

    you've managed to express this quite eloquently, and in form, even! nicely done!






  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    January 11

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    lol

    Not only was this hilarious and wonderfully lyrical, it had a rather true ring to it!
    All these politics just get on my nerves!
    In the fifth line you had "flows" twice, by accident I think.
    An excellent entry.... good luck!


  • sunshinegirl
    January 11

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    You know you are right. It is a shame that more don't vote, but then again, if more did vote, would it really make a difference in the way this country is going? I am not sure. All of the government and polical parties are just out to line their pockets, and the poor working man suffers.... I mean, you almost have to make $20.00 an hr. just to survive today. But then as the saying goes, "the more you make, the more they take" So who wins, those in government, and politics.... they are the ones that have the fat wallets, not the low and poor working man/woman. We suffer......

    Ok, look at this I am ranting again.. Sorry.

    Best of luck in this contest!

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