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How could I be so blind!

All the time I spent,
trying to get over
was useless,
Cause when I saw you kiss her
my heart droped to the floor,
My eyes filled with tears,
and my heart began to race,

I know I said I did;nt like you,
And really I thought that it was true,
But after today
I know the only thing that real is,
My feelings for you,

She is supposed to be my friend,
But she never said she liked you,
When I asked her she just said no,
we're just friends,
Im starting to see that it was all lies,

it was stupid of me to belive it,
I could tell that there was more,
But now Im left alone,
To cry my self to sleep once more.

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I wrote this on 1/8/08... Its just how I feel and I know that its not one of my best but I just had to vent my feelings and this is what came out.

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  • Ali - Pie
    January 14, 2008
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    i know how you feel, ive felt the same way before, its painful.
    beautifully pain- filled poem.


  • brattybran13
    January 11, 2008

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    Dont worry about it being your best. It came from the heart and it expresses how you feel, therefore it's beautiful..time will heal all wounds, don't worry.