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the girl...

the lovely girl i see everyday
seems to realize what i see.

just joke around
enjoy yourself.

but every emotion. word. feeling
i've observed so well.

a subject of science
yet... soo much more to me.

her beauty is hideous
though it is her attractive characteristic.

sarcasm and honesty
sweet and hostile

  the kind of girl i want.

just like the monster
who's like my sister.

yet... this girl...
she makes me feel almost human.

    no longer alone
    no longer isolated.

this girl i'm falling for
  the girl who sees me
      as only a friend.

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  • XStuckInANightmareX
    January 13, 2008

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    This is good.
    I love this.
    Its really good and flows well.
    Great job hun.