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More Than Meets The Eye

You're not very handsome,
To most,
you're ugly.

You are kind,
caring,
cheerful,
funny.

Your soul is
as a mountain
covered
in colorful tulips.
A sunny day,
with a soft breeze.

To my heart,
your beauty
is visable.

Desiring to see,
what my heart
has always loved,
I set my eyes
on you,
And seen beyond.


I love to look at you.

:-)

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  • Blood Bloom
    May 19, 2008

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    I understand that you look beyond a pretty face of a good body! Most people I meet say thing like so and so are nasty and ugly but that is what makes them rude or different. Excellent peice.