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The Precocious are Ferocious

Some learn at a young age
What takes others years,
Get what they are wanting
Life's Giggles,not Life's tears.

Some seem to know upfront
The things that they desire,
And then work to that end
To flame their heart's own fire.

Others never catch on
Until they're on their own,
And it's then they wonder
Just why they're all alone.

I've found I'm a slow starter
But once I do catch on,
I'm a gung-ho tiger
Before the thrill is gone.

So whether a go-getter
Or late bloomer my friend,
Do what is right for You--
You'll be glad in the end!

Author notes

My Prompt: Be sure to watch this humorous clip from which my poem springs:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bGybYd_9KQI&feature=related

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Comments

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    Such a great picture... wonderful write.. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • Hashnah Sheviatte
    January 20, 2008

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    nice message! Well sorry, I become a bit busy last few weeks so I this was the only moment that I can look for this poem,.. It was a nice entry... Good luck in the contest.,..

    Ruthy


    • MassMan
      February 1, 2008
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      Thank you so much Ruthy for the Silver trophy win in your contest with Blue book. I enjoyed the prompt given and the opportunty to be inspired by it. Thanks for holding the contest.

      David (((((SmileS))))))


  • Bluebook Pet
    January 14, 2008
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    best wishes for the contest.

    • MassMan
      February 1, 2008
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      Thanks for granting me the Silver trophy in your contest. It was my joy and pleasure to participate.
      Thanks alot,
      David

      P>S> I love your dancing cat!


  • BellaD
    January 14, 2008
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    Love it!

    Great job on fitting your poem to your video clip. Best of luck in the contest.


    • MassMan
      January 14, 2008
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      Thanks Bella D

      Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on the poem.
      The YouTube video is a real hoot!
      David


  • Hashnah Sheviatte
    January 11, 2008
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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bGybYd_9KQI&feature=related

    This is your prompt....
    Thanks...

    Ruthy

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