able to hide pain,
able to hide dissappointments
able to hide the love
but unable to hide from a mirror,
which sees all this and more.
two pools drowning their only victim
the one to whom they belong
two life savers when he walks in the room
two bullets as the door slams
two pool of tears as the screaming continues
two hollow holes when life is gone.
Author notes
this is of eyes, and the things they see in my life.
what is your opinion of this?
Comments
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Very nice. I like the imagery at the end. Reminds me of a lot of people I spent time with for a summer.
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i like it, its short but holds a lot of emotion.
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pretty good writing my friend! keep it up!
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