rich tones of ruby lips
imbue themselves in memories
of sweet summer wine kisses
stolen beneath a bower of
magenta bougainvillea
as we tasted the joy
of love's first impression
sealed forever by
rich tones of ruby lips
Author notes
Pearl-Dragon choosing c - ruby remembrance
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A contest entry
- Brevity is the Soul of Wit - A Rounds Contest by CitrineSunrise.
600 points, ended January 20, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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Starting and finishing it like that, was both Mum was beautiful and brilliant
This took on ruby remembrance so well and was a soft touch a a poem but with beautiful imagery
I very much so enjoyed this read good luck in your contest there Mum 
Cin
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Oh this is just beautiful! Very sensual yet it has such innocence penned within it too. The first and last lines repeated really works well with this.
All the best in the contest
Gaylene
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wow auntie this is such an amazing and powerful write which holds deep and beautiful words. i love it well done and best of luck
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