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twilight




time unfolded
lifeless layers
of black and white

drained of color

meanings lost

until found

within memories
of love

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prompt- movement inside the grey

twenty words, including title

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  • layla.
    January 11, 2008

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    very deep and meaningful interpretation of life. you do wonders with words. well done. good luck and thanks for entering.


  • rebeka
    January 11, 2008
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  • Cat gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    yeah. you have to delve into the past sometimes to accept the present- to find the peace inside the grey..

    very nice

    m


  • philosphyofkate
    January 11, 2008

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    gray is my favourite colour so i had to work with your imagery - but an excellent write. i was lost. and the end made me smile, although memories of love often don't.

  • Suzanne Dia
    January 11, 2008

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    This is pretty .. I like memories that bring peace. nicely done.

    Good luck in the contest, too!




  • Cat gold member
    January 11, 2008
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    a lovely little piece and take on the prompt

    m

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