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Electric Emotions

Electric Impluses
Spark flashes
Of Recognition
Or Anger
Or Greed
Or impetulance
Lighting up
Dark Halls
Of Grey
To produce
Auras of Colorful
Personality!

Author notes

Word Count: 24 Words
Theme: Movement Inside the Grey

A contest entry

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Comments


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 11, 2008

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    I like this Great Write Good luck with it.

    RedwingSpirit


  • layla.
    January 11, 2008

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    very provocative. nice flow. keeps the attention of the readers. well done. good luck and thanks for entering.


  • Cat gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    i like the idea behind this piece very much- that a personality is grey until you find the impulses of color-

    this is clever and i appreciate your entry here..

    m

  • Suzanne Dia
    January 11, 2008

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    Very enthusiastic.

    Nice work with a few words.

    Good luck in the contest.