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[ I'm not at all obsessed with this thing ]

I'm not at all obsessed with this thing
I just love it so much
and it's strange
when they're speckled
and dotted
Like a Lady Bug spotted

I love freckles I do
I remark on them
it's true

I get weird looks
strange half smiles
and I sigh
Wishing
itching for a sharpie kind of thing
to connect the dots
and make something
extreme

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  • Maybe Anastasia
    January 11, 2008

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    Very nice poem. I love the images you painted but I think it leave a little to much to the imagination. Thanks for the entry.