I look deeply into your eyes,
I see you smile back at me.
This is the moment that we've
Been waiting for,
For so many years.
I look at your clothed body,
Just waiting to tear them off.
You walk to me,
Wrap your arms around my neck and whisper
'Please take me baby'
I smile and lay you gently on the bed.
I unbutton your blouse while you turn red.
I say
'We don't have to, if you're not ready.
I can wait. I'll alway's wait for you'
You push my hands lower,
'No, Tree, I want you to start there'
I smile, and reach down and pull off your skirt.
To see your legs even more,
With my name written on you.
I smile and you lift your leg over my shoulder,
I lower my head,
And start to lick the taste of your innocence
Makes my member throb.
I plunge two fingers deep inside you
You scream out in shock because you thought,
I wouldn't be so fast.
I take off all my clothes to show you my tanned, worked out body.
Then I lay myself on top of you,
You move your legs over, spreading them wider.
For deeper penentration.
I slide back in.
You scream in pain.
I slow down,
you shriek at me.
'Faster faster! Please don't stop'
And I don't
'Till your dad walks in.
A contest entry
- Tag You're Pregnant by NastyNickie.
730 points, ended May 7, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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lol, sorry. I really enjoyed this poem, but I just started laughing at the last line. I'm not sure if it was meant to be silly or thought provocing but I found it hilareous! You should have probobly labled this erotica but other than that I really loved this poem.
Congrats on the wonderful write! -
well, i loved it, although the beginning was definitely not up to par, but i'll have to think about this one ^.^
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dang! the last line is hilarious, whether it's meant to be or not. you have portrayed erotica very well and your detail descriptions add to the sexiness of it. although, i would add that since this is adult and erotica, you categorize it as such. just a thought.
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