You get in my face
I turn away
You force me back
and there I stay
I'll save the anger for another day
You tell me I'm wrong
I say you're probably right
You tell me go
and there I stay
I'll save my self pity for another day
you get me in trouble
I take it with a smile
You put me in prison
and there I stay
I'll save my revenge for another day
I finally get out
You're walking down the street
You're going to hell
and there you'll stay
save your opinion for another day
Author notes
dedicated to all of those who just love to bring me down. Karma is a bitch, just remember that
A contest entry
- Dark Heart of Agony Contest by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended January 13, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Want Gore, Erotica, Laughter, Love, Anything Great by So Strange.
720 points, ended May 16, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Result Of Boredom: A "Whatever" Contest by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 25, 2008, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"you get me in trouble
I take it with a smile
You put me in prison
and there I stay
I'll save my revenge for another day"
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I love this. Its really good. I promise once I get back into the whole commenting thing, then i will comment your others
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ooo nice! that was totally awesome! I loved the little one liners after each stanza, they really add to the overall effect of the poem. I see you've entered it in a contest so good luck and I think this one's trophy worthy!!
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thank you so much...I really appreciate all the positive comments i get, they are what keep me going...(Love the image by the way, live long A7X)
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