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Divine Reflections - Video Slam

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I look into Your face of innocence

delighted by such abundance of beauty

appeased by Your gaze of serenity


Yet it is not Your mask of impermanence

that charms my senses

but Your mirror of eternity

that touches my soul


In Your eyes I see my face

before my mother’s birth


the smile of God

before He moved to Heaven


And through Your tear

I feel His joy to see me

welcoming Him back


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Author notes

watch the video : http://s247.photobucket.com/albums/gg123/poetmaa/?action=view¤t=divinereflections.flv


my constantly updated video-poetry :
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3791503


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for Amma with love

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painting and morph "amma" by maa

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 28

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    Wow, I can see why this won gold in the original contest, congratulations. a beautiful write. Awe inspiring. Great work.
    Kelli


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    February 27

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    So beautifully scripted and enchanting. Kept me held deeply. Thanks for sharing this, it certainly deserves another colour... x Blessings, Lavender Butterfly.

    • maa gold member
      February 27
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      an amazing idea for a contest ... thank you sooo much for the gold ... this is probably the only poem I have left the green trophy on ... usually, I delete them, feeling that my poem isn't worthy enough to receive any attention at all ... silly me

      much love,

      marion

  • myrataal silver member
    January 16

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    Ah, lover of souls and of birds ...

    we share such divine similarities! I simply love God ... and birds! Your poem is beautiful; your presentation in the visual lovely and graceful. Thank you for sharing the totality of your being.

    Love
    Myra


  • Amera gold member
    January 16

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    Oh sweet sister, this is a true gift! Of course you knew I'd watch the video. I love it! Your voice is so soft and soothing. The peace felt is enhanced with the bird, I can see he feels it too.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • left
    January 11

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    The video slams are a great idea! They add so much more to just the letters in this page. The tone and mimic (decorated by the bird ) give this poem a different dimensions. Thank you for creating and sharing and the best of luck in the contest! Take care,

    Chris


  • MargaretG silver member
    January 11

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    You help us to see eternal beauty in the shape of one you love, who also helps you to see your own. That is a divine moment. I enjoyed the video, well done! Best of luck!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    January 11

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    And through Your tear

    I feel His joy to see me

    welcoming Him back

    I can feel the light in the words...well done...

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