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Stealing

Inevitably inevitable trust
My conscience can't decide how to
Impede as if a balm
Scraping. So gently
Stolen beside a well
Take a draw from the divine [you go]
And leave me behind, blind smiles
Lost on a face that cannot.
Know how far I fell
Into that embrace a ban doned to
Never passing, envelope leitmotiv
Grass surrounding me

Author notes

Well... I guess another pseudo surreal, semi-faux cryptisistic piece.
Finding subversion.

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  • BelieveInHope21
    January 30, 2008

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    wow

    can't really find the words to describe your poem...i mean i really like it!!thanks for sharing!!!much love!!


  • MissCassie
    January 27, 2008

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    My brain is having trouble wrapping around this because the TV is so loud.
    Ok ok.
    Wow.
    Why do your poems always leave me speechless? (once I wrap my brain around them that is)
    Okay so I don't have words, BUT I really like the last line. <3


  • SarahLea-lost poet
    January 11, 2008
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    YAY, I'm the first one to comment... love your poem... Love ya


    • Naznomarn
      January 11, 2008
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      Thank yoouuu it's dedicated to someone very special to me

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