I cried again
behind my eyes of stone
My heart shall never mend
I'll always be alone.
He didn't have to lie...
I can no longer see...
As the wasted days go by,
Tell the truth to me!
You hid behind the silence
Of broken, unspoken dreams
His anger turned to violence
My tears turn into a stream
Down my blood-washed face
His words are like a whip
"You're nothing... you're a disgrace!"
I cried to you...
The words hidden behind the phone
I held the gun
Leave me alone.
What do you think?
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I'm glad to know how I really make you feel... lol, I lluuff you. good poem. -
wow.. this is one hela of a poem you've written.. i like the imagery and the truth in this.. the emotion is just wow.. this is a sad feeling knowing that your someone hides something bad to you yet you still have doubts..
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this is excellent, so much emotion it jsut floods me with sorrow, but at the same time its a great piece of writing, good job
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Raw and emotional.
This is good. Sure it's subject matter is sad, but it's a good write because it allows you to see feelings and emotions the speaker is good through. You're really good.
-Ray.
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