just when you think you've found it
reality sets in and lets you
see the lies more clearly.
dizziness and fatigue take over,
a numbness of the heart...
stomache aches from deep within.
i know he doesnt love me
i've seen that look before.
cold and rehearsed.
why is he yelling at me today
why doesnt he want me around
why does he waste my time,
his time...
it fades one day at a time
he thinks i'm blind
what is this act,
why does he have to act?
you've lost me,
you let me fade.
good bye.
A contest entry
- What ever comes from the heart by oldphotosonlybringt.
360 points, ended January 26, 2008, 21 entries
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a lost at what cost daily blissful love turns into something crazy til the Love is all so pleaze never allow your Lovely self to fade away!!!!
LOVED this write!
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I know exactly how the pain
And constant numbness -- Tear you up inside
Leaving you bitter and betrayed,
yet in the end there is light
And hope for the better
Thanks.
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it fades one day at a time
he thinks i'm blind
what is this act,
you've lost me,
you let me fade.
good bye.
those lines are so amazing i love them your poem was great thanks sweetie -
Wow... I've been there... with someone who acts that part when you know the love has ended!!
I love the ending... just goodbye! that's all you can do!
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how truthfully you have spoken, as reality sets in, you know though the lies still flow. Thanks for sharing this.
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