you caress me with a reverence
I have never known, while
your every whisper holds
a thousand unspoken nuances
as softly uttered words take us
on a journey of discovery,
we seek comfort in
the warmth of our sighs
there is beauty in the joy
that flows between us,
as intangible feelings
surround graceful movement
in that moment when the afterglow
of our lovemaking descends upon us,
I am in awe of the intensity
with which you give yourself to me
so many years I searched until
I found my destiny...or it found me,
you are my lover and my friend
what more could I ask?
Author notes
...I've never thought of making love as being a holy thing, until ...Unknown
This quote is a prompt.
Please write a poem inspired by this quote.
Around 20 lines.
In a list
A contest entry
- making love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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many years I searched until
I found my destiny...or it found me,
you are my lover and my friend
what more could I ask?
Your roaming here and there with so much magical immagery is the real joy of the love and its wonders..well done... -
..."as softly uttered words take us on a journey of discovery, we seek comfort in the warmth of our sighs..." and "there is beauty in the joy that flows between us" and "you are my lover and my friend, what more could I ask?"...You express in so serene a way the give and take of real love-making...love that creates and brings life...Bless you...Peace, Rhonda
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You really do have a unique way of putting such thought and feeling inside a poem. I know you will do well in the contest because you are such a gifted poet, but you really did write such a very special poem.
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wow this is an amang take on the prompt and really captures a deeper meaning. well done and best of luck auntie
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