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butchered your heart

I ripped out your heart
You suspected I would from the start

Feelings of grief now fill my soul
with you no longer there to make me feel whole

The mistakes you made are now all in the passed
and only mine is what will forever last

Maybe if you were around more
I would maybe loved you without the sore

But what the hell do anyone care
I'm the one at fault and sentenced bare

Naked and cold alone and sad
Im left to die in this cause you feel mad

My reasons don't count and my feelings no merrit
This is love, left out cold and alone
my apolgy not accepted
for it can't reach your throne

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written for the man that use to love me...

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  • Romily
    January 11, 2008
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    Nice imagination blended with the flow of your poetic muse. Good work.