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"I love you's"

"I love you"

Countless time

Chanted by your lips

To everyone;even me

You say it but

Do you mean it?

What it means

You cared not

"Why?" I asked,

Do you say "I love you"

So carelessly

They were empty

A crooked smile

Barely a smile

"Ain't enough time"

Was your reply

As time pass

Life in your eyes flickered

Strength in your arms faded

But never, the "I love you's"

With glazed eyes

You gasped for air

Every second of life

A blessing from heaven

Torn apart

I whispered, "I love you"

"Goodbye" was your reply

Empty; you crushed my heart

All I asked for

Was an "I love you"

One, just one

With feelings in them

Not just words

"I love you" I said

Again and again

Cold silence

Time ran out

"Goodbye"

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  • fierra
    January 15, 2008

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    owh! i felt very sad,and sorry for this girl/boy in this poem..the flow is great,and overall is good..
    good job!!