"I love you"
Countless time
Chanted by your lips
To everyone;even me
You say it but
Do you mean it?
What it means
You cared not
"Why?" I asked,
Do you say "I love you"
So carelessly
They were empty
A crooked smile
Barely a smile
"Ain't enough time"
Was your reply
As time pass
Life in your eyes flickered
Strength in your arms faded
But never, the "I love you's"
With glazed eyes
You gasped for air
Every second of life
A blessing from heaven
Torn apart
I whispered, "I love you"
"Goodbye" was your reply
Empty; you crushed my heart
All I asked for
Was an "I love you"
One, just one
With feelings in them
Not just words
"I love you" I said
Again and again
Cold silence
Time ran out
"Goodbye"
Comments
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owh! i felt very sad,and sorry for this girl/boy in this poem..the flow is great,and overall is good..
good job!!


