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Mc1r

Missing image

Male head
Edo peoples, Benin Kingdom, Nigeria
Copper alloy, iron
22.2 cm (8 3/4 in.)
82-5-2, purchased with funds provided by
the Smithsonian Collections Acquisition Program,

 

 

Past lives paint dust-colored scenarios,
and post themselves on now-a-day billboards
to advertise a parched sense of being there.

I faintly remember...
that is until pictures pop into my mind
in flashy darkened hues of afterlife.

I reigned as Queen of Songhay tribes
in Ancient Africa.
Ruled in my father's absence in Benin.

Covered the cosmos with a hand woven shawl
my grandmother spun from the silk of Persia,
and flung the perfumed garment in my lover's face.

My speech patterns influenced language, politics,

educational systems, philosophy, science, and arts,
giving rise to the European Renaissance.

I am neo-classical, prehistoric,
the Mycenaean script almost forgotten.
I am every island, valley, and mountain fathomed.

My bones unearthed in archaeological digs
still create a melanin factor in plant, animal,
and protista kingdoms.

My prototype was, and is cloned daily
to induce future generations of my likeness
even through my fervent protests.

Scientists are surely unaware of the inability
to duplicate a peculiar people
such as the gene pool my kin excrete.

But I sigh, knowing the outcome of mutations,
and practice teaching them how to walk upright
regardless of my weariness.

Illogical presumptions about me
have formed irrational assumptions.
But simplicity allows for commonality.

So, I become what you wish you could be,
and you foster envy in my stead
because I have no want for any human thing.

Basic ethnicity aside, I am the first and last,
born of dirt scooped up by the Creator,
molded into existence by Universal hands.

















Author notes

The Title: "Mc1r"

The melanocortin 1 receptor (also known as melanocyte-stimulating hormone receptor or Mc1r) is one of the key proteins in regulating hair and skin color. A member of the G-protein-coupled receptor family of proteins, it functions at the surface of specialist pigment producing cells (called melanocytes) to regulate melanogenesis in mammals.


"Songhay"

Songhai was one of the largest African empires in history. This empire bore the same name as its leading ethnic group, the Songhai. Its capital was the city of Gao, where a small Songhai state had existed since the 9th Century. Its base of power was on the bend of the Niger River in present-day Niger and Burkina Faso.


"Benin"

Benin, officially the Republic of Benin, is a country in Western Africa, formerly known as Dahomey (until 1975). It borders Togo to the west, Nigeria to the east and Burkina Faso and Niger to the north; its short coastline to the south leads to the Bight of Benin. Its capital is Porto Novo, but the seat of government is Cotonou.

"Persia"

The most widespread entity considered to have been a Persian Empire was the Achaemenid Empire (550–330 BC) under Darius and Xerxes (or Xerkes) — famous in antiquity as the foe of the classical Greek states (See Greco-Persian Wars) — a united Persian kingdom that originated in the region now known as Pars province (Fars province) of Iran.


"Mycenaean Script"

the most ancient attested form of the Greek language, spoken on the Greek mainland and on Crete in the 16th to 11th centuries BC, before the Dorian invasion.

"protista kingdoms"

Protists, Greek protiston -a meaning the (most) first of all ones, are a diverse group of organisms, comprising those eukaryotes that cannot be classified in any of the other kingdoms as fungi, animals, or plants. They are usually treated as the kingdom Protista or Protoctista. Protoctists (or protists) are a paraphyletic grade, rather than a natural, (monophyletic) group, and so do not have much in common besides a relatively simple organization -- either they are unicellular, or they are multicellular without highly specialized tissues. The term protista was coined by Ernst Haeckel in 1866.

All definitions can be found at:

http://wikipedia.org















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  • Sarin Darktree
    October 13

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    You have penned a beautiful piece filled with so much information.I have to say I really do like this poem and it is written beautifully.Thank you for taking the time and entering this poem in my contest for it was a joy to read.I wish you all the luck in my contest and in the future.


  • Deaths Desire
    May 23, 2008

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    goo

    Thanks for the read, it's nice to see something well metred and rhymed, which is too much of a rareity on here. I would have to dissagree that a sonnet requires iambic pentameter, although that has been the most common convention


  • Chanes Forever
    May 16, 2008
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    Whoa. How's this for profound and intelligent...I love it. My favorite stanza:
    So, I become what you wish you could be,
    and you foster envy in my stead
    because I have no want for any human thing.
    I just love the sound of it. You definitely have talent, I believe.

  • LunaPatricia
    May 3, 2008

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    Deep

    I feel like I'm invading your life just by reading this. It seems to come from deep inside of you, from a place were nobody can enter just you and the heat in your blood. Those Universal hands are writing a beautiful story.


  • Krick
    March 26, 2008

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    hey i like your poem and i'm hosting a contest for a friend of mine because she has never had a poem was written about her and i was wondering if you would enter because atm i have one entry
    it really was good


  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    You spin words in a way I can only dream of doing. I have learned much from reading your work and yes I admit I am hooked. Your words have a way of rolling around in my head over and over again. Bless you, dear sister of mine. As always, thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • internal heights
    March 19, 2008

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    It is absolutely baffling to me how creative and original this poem is. Not only does it show you to be an extremely intelligent and cultured individual, it also shows what an amazing writer you are. I really enjoyed it and it's a great form of inspiration for a fledgling poet such as myself. Shine on


  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 2, 2008
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    nice.


  • just rob gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    Somehow,

    the picture of that gorgeous grandbaby in the corner turned this full-circle. To see that continuation of life in this reliquary of lives, of tribes, reminds me of the need to feed the future our own footsteps, our own understanding of cycles.To educate within the image of art is a task too often left behind. I'm better for reading this.


  • madamcb
    January 16, 2008

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    What Can I Say

    Not only was I Elevated, Educated, Motivated, Innovated,Aspirated,Inundated and Captivated by this knowledgeable write, I was in it and totally into it. If I didn't have so many words in me I would be at a loss for words at the brilliance I just witnessed and will be witnessing again and will make sure everyone I can get a copy of this to, will witness.


    WHAT BAR? It is no longer in the stratosphere.

    Thanx, conni

  • Sign of the Swine
    January 14, 2008

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    'Basic ethnicity aside, I am the first and last,
    born of dirt scooped up by the Creator,
    molded into existence by Universal hands.'

    You have become a favorite. Beautiful write.


  • HeavenonEarth
    January 12, 2008
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    P.S. Adam would be proud


  • HeavenonEarth
    January 12, 2008

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    Raise the bar? Heck I think this one actually removed the bar!
    This was spoken so eloquently as only a queen could. This takes the reader back to a time making the reader realize the realms of difference, the history that unfolds in our genes that lie within our own dna. Our past does shape our future. If only we could begin to understand. Not to replay but to learn from those mistakes to make our future so much brighter. Or to embrace that beauty from the past to move forward in our future.


    Ok Renee- You truly need to stop here (although it would be a loss and we would miss you). You need to stop here & start publishing dear- it's just YOUR right.
    Take a moment please, to re- read this and let it guide you to that choice. It's there, can you see it?

    I know you don't need it because it doesn't make you any better than anyone else on here so don't worry about that argument. It will reach more people by book or cd. Because people will be drawn to it, buy it, pick it up, gift it to someone.

    Enough said,


    I Love you ♥
    ~Joy


  • Florida Sunshine
    January 11, 2008

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    Excellent job~ you words carry authority as if a queen was speaking~ I'm carried away to another time ~ another era ~ a new realm ~ The imagery is awesome ~ The Author's notes are very helpful~ I went back and read it again, and how profound ~ I found the piece to be. I especially liked:

    "Illogical presumptions about me
    have formed irrational assumptions."

    Sadly so true about so many things in the world today...

    You did a fantastic job~ this type could easily be considered a classic write ~

    Thanks so much for taking the time to write a special poem for this contest ~ I truly appreciate you sharing your talents with me. ~ Good luck to you


  • nichtmich silver member
    January 11, 2008

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    The thinking man's/woman's poetry. You have a vast store of knowledge and weave it into a beautiful tapestry of living history. The title is intriguing and the first stanza sets the tone of the poem exquisitely. Well done!


  • Princess Peach
    January 11, 2008
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    kool! i like the pic! best of luck in the contest!


  • tomisb
    January 11, 2008

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    My sweet sweet "Lucy" these winds of time have cast you back across the beaches of man far too many times. We still are searching to awaken the spirit so we may do more than just walk in the war of our minds. This is an elegant ecstatic joyous song of sorrow and relief. Beautifully etched upon my mind. Truly lovely and passionate a volcano in the beach of time.
    Love, Tom B.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    I loved this that was really profound!

    so lovely and nourishing to read! you've been sneaking
    peeks in the libraries of heaven!
    excellent job..just bathed in the textures and layers of
    this poem!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : )) loved the textures to this poem!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    wow wow wow, your a poetess who knows more than just words. I admire you for this sweet woman. good luck in contest.


  • knot2tangled
    January 11, 2008

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    As Revelations - always a blessing to read!

    Comprised of such knowledge, your poetry carries wisdom and hurdles time with a gentle leap!
    I should be thanking you for the privilege.
    much Luck in the contest

    Knot


  • Karen Layne
    January 11, 2008
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    A strange, oddly lovely piece. I really really liked it. I especially liked the last stanza.


  • Transcend All
    January 11, 2008

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    Transcend All

    I'm always blow away by the flow of words, the style , but most importantly the topic you hold dear to your heart. As far as setting the bar for this contest .... well your just too GROOVY for words. I enjoy reading your work very much!

    Namaste'


  • WisdomWarrior
    January 11, 2008

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    You are the BOMB!!! I am so proud of you. You are the gem that makes the rest of the jewelery look good. You embody all the achievements of our people with pride, confidence and style. I appreciate that because in a world so eager to find examples of our failings it is encouraging and empowering to look to an example that cannot be denied regardless of attempts and desires of opposition.

    Well done sis! Keep kicking butt!

    One Love,

    John


  • Trellis
    January 11, 2008

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    This should be in a college textbook. Amazing write, Renee. I really appreciate the information in your Author Notes. Saved me a lot of time googling. You ARE a poet!

    Cris


  • secberm
    January 11, 2008

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    Look at'chu! Got me in my study with a smoking jacket, chewing stick, and wire rims on; rumaging through old tomes and saying, "Here, here" or "Verily" every few seconds!

    Why you had to bring me back to school?! LOL

    You KNOW I wanna stay in my thugged out, ra-ra, mentality now. This is where civilized evolution brought me!

    Love the flow/content. Read it twice actually. Smoothe.

    Well done, sweets.

    DEZ


  • Cannonsfire
    January 11, 2008
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    This just speaks of a proud heritage and tradition that no matter what will exist until we all become dust again. More should feel and see the beauty that exists in Africa, not to be feared but admired for the triumph over many trials. You make me proud just to be a woman, stand beside you dear friend. Love, C


  • rite
    January 11, 2008

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    Knowing ones past in both the physical and spiritual realms where existence has evolved, will guide ones awareness through space and time ahead. Misperceptions have been at the foundation of many situations that have not contributed in a positive way to history of mankind. In each of our lives we have gained experience to which we may later have flash backs that allows us to fit the puzzle of existence. Great poetry in many respects that I enjoyed reading and pondering over. Thank yu for creating and sharing and the best of luck in the contest. Take care,

    Chris


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    January 11, 2008
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    It is so nice to click on a poem like this and not just hear the rhyme roll of your tounge but to be able to learn somthing new also. This is a truely remarkeble piece and I applaud you for a job really well done!!! Thank you for sharing this with us and all the best for the future and for 2008.

    Rebekah


  • Peteskid gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    So this is what it looks like when you combine excellent research and brilliant poetry ino a page, and the reader finds his/her sense of wonder, leaves more culturally entlightened, and so very impressed...wonderful, wonderful work here...PK


  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    January 11, 2008
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    Set the bar any higher
    and air traffic will want notification.

    It was not until the fifth stanza
    that I deciphered
    you were speaking of a gene or DnA.

    I am usually faster than that -(i like the challenge)

    there was not a moment within these words where I was loosing interest or lost understanding.

    exceptional writing my friend!


  • adios muchachos gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    Dear Renee

    How did I know I was going to learn something if I clicked on this tonight?LOL

    I was going to try and avoid saying that this is way out of my league, but, it is the "something else" that made the term "something else" what it is today!

    I usually read the parameters of the contest-host/hostess
    when I read a contest poem, but this, I have to imagine,
    has got to have been what they were looking for and more!

    Is that one of your grandbabies in the photo?
    If it were me, and I had a hat as pretty as that, I'd want my picture taken too!

    This was simply great! And not so simply great!

    Thanks for posting this for us to see.

    John-Las Vegas, Nevada


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