peering at the display,
He could picture the dame in it.
She would hurt some necks.
they'd be turning so fast.
He still couldn't figure it.
How a New York boy,
could croon and get such rewards.
Women adore sensitive men,
even when it's just a facade.
Hearts lie so much faster than minds do.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie - Image Prompted by Stardust-luvr.
650 points, ended January 26, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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well done as our minds travel in such melodic chaos and bring others to our knees in hearts croons with such granduer thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx
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Ah ok. Looked at the prompt picture and am slowly starting to understand
I'm a ditz, what do you expect? 
But you've done a great job within the line limits, I can't do that myself. Amazing ending stanza, that's what says most to me.
Best of luck! 
♥Bandaid
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