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A Mother's Plea

 

 

I am here…always
when dark clouds surround you

softly whispering
tomorrow’s dreams of iridescent colors

drift tenderly upon my river of devotion,
swaddling you into my embracing shores
gently I will caress each hardship
that consumes your heart

lean your spirit against my strength
forgive each raindrop

when lightening strikes
leave behind the residue of confusion
liberate your pain

for I will ascend beside you
guiding
feather to hope
gifting my love for comfort

close those tired wings little one,
do not fly~




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PIC:"Sick Child"
Edvard Munch
(1863 - 1944)


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  • poppa
    February 29, 2008

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    "gently I will caress each hardship
    that consumes your heart" ...what fantastic lines....such a great job on the prompt....wow, simply wow...


  • PerfectImperfection
    February 5, 2008

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    Wow. This piece struck me in many ways... A beautiful and complex piece of emotion. Comforting, assuring, and ever encouraging beyond all absence of 'tomorrow'. Excellent write! Thank you so much for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 12, 2008
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