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rain in spain...LOL

Feel the charge in the air.
Hairs on arms stand on end
Power seems to be everywhere
sizzling light about to descend

Smell the air, how fresh and clean.
Winds pick up and become fierce.
Sky has turned crimson, gray and citrine,
amazing and invigorating, heart's being pierced.

Baptism by falling rain.
Droplets plopping everywhere.
Sins being washed away,
even though we're not aware


Nourish the land and our souls.
Help us to see what the deluge beholds.
Food for crops, the earth unfolds.
Rain, your name we do extoll





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  • Whispers of Hope
    January 15, 2008
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    THis is a Great piece thanks for entering and sharing!!


  • Aurielle
    January 11, 2008
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    i love the rhthym, and rhyme...