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Falling Apart

There's a hole in my heart
And I dont know why
There's peaces falling silently
And I have no tears left to cry

Memories fatigue my complex mind
Thought's play childishly with my heart
I'm running blind
Trying so hard, just to fall apart

Hurt me
So I can feel a different kind of pain
Close my eyes so I cant see
These things that drive me insane

I'm losing in this game
I'm falling, and I'm the one to blame
Bring me to the refuge that I seek
Ignore my eyes, that have begun to leak

I'm nothing but a problem
With no solution
I am a contradiction
I'm nothing but trash
That's been forgotten

I'm trying to scream
But my mouth has the moisture of cotton
Success is only a dream
Failure, its not what it seems

Take me back to when it all made sense

Steal all my pain away
Dont leave me in the midst of chaos I have created

Bring me calming peace
...Is there such a thing?

There's a hole in my heart
And I dont know why
There's peaces falling silently
And I have no tears left to cry

Memories fatigue my complex mind
Thought's play childishly with my heart
I'm running blind
Trying so hard...Just to fall apart.

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  • She burns
    February 10, 2008
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    So painful and deep here, full of hurting inside, your heart, beating to to bbroken again...


  • hey charlie
    February 1, 2008

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    You've misspelled some things, but your poem is pretty unique. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • XxTearsHaveFallenxX
    January 16, 2008
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    wow this is really good great write.