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a smile

lovely eyes you shine so bright
a smile of an angel
but you are so far
you love another and i love you
determination fills my blood
no pain is to much when your my inspiration
id punch rocks to sand and sand to dust
id walk forever for five minutes of your love
you weild my soul against me
i want to fall to my knees at your presance
your my only one
the only one i want to love
no one can replace
not every person will sell there soul for anything
but i would for you

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i was inspired by the girl i love

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  • Tsunai Ketsuma
    April 23, 2008
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    its nice, I think she would like it if she knew, i'll explain later lol


  • m2lost24get
    January 12, 2008
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    well done so very often our feelings of love and admiration out weighs all things around us. Our dreams of love are inspired by so much in the presense of the other and you spoke of it well as when we are in love they are in our every thought through all distances for even any chance moment in time. thank you for entering and many blessings always xx