As i bath in your blood.
As i make a manquin of your body.
As we lie there in bed.
your dead.
As i cut off your sink for a coat.
As i make a cup of your throat.
As i make your torso a taot.
Your dead.
And i make your face my own.
As i panit your feet red.
As i hang your head from my wall.
your dead.
Your my trophy.
Your my Bride.
You my life.
YOur dead.
A contest entry
- Make me feel agony and pain by Alexis Manley.
360 points, ended January 11, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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This is so freakishly good.
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Heheheeeaaahahahaaa!!
Evil mo fo! i likes!!
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wow
this is like one of the best freak fantasies eveeeeer. It was really simple but well written and it painted a grrrreeeaat pic, keep up the good work cutie
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ummm *hides?* lol just kidding this is great you know that
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I agree this is VERY!! graphic, but it works. I like the phrases you used. It reminds me of someone who is very obsessive! Keep writting like this!
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shit..wow this is nice very graphic. I like it i hope you write more like this.
Your sister,
Kat -
Very well versed, a few spwlling errors. Otherwise a great write!Thnk you for entering my contest!
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