Take me to where the wind blows,
North, South, East, or West,
Which ever you think will be the best.
Hold me close, Hold me tight,
But please don't ever lose sight.
Love me now like you loved me then,
Love me all the way to the end.
Close your eyes and let go of all
the pain you have bestowed.
So please my baby bring out all the
woman within,
She's in there waiting patiently,
For you to see all that she can and
and will be.
I wish I may I wish I might be with
you once again tonight.
Like a Eagle soaring through,
You bring out all that's true.
For an Eagle sees everything through
it's eye's,
There will be no more LIES.
So please my baby let us be,
With peace inside for all eternity.
I wish I may I wish I might,
See my stars shining through your eye's
so bright.
Your eye's have pulled me in so tight,
Never ever to lose sight,
Of what and where we have been,
Never having to start over where we
began.
So please my baby come home to me and
let me show you what will be.
Author notes
I wrote this poem to show the man I love just how much I do love him!
~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
A contest entry
- Happily Ever After by Unstoppable.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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A nice piece, I wish it had been more consistant with rhyme, or lack of it. Regardless, the wording and emotion are beautiful, and the one you love is lucky.
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This is just so beautiful. A wonderful gesture to show just how much you love your man. I can relate. Plus the picture is just captivating. I loved everything about this poem.
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congrats on gold
i love you -
This was a very beautiful poem, and i like the rhyme. It was powerful, and the picture to go with it really suits it. Thanks so much for entering this lovely piece & best of luck in my contest
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Such a beautiful piece so full of emotion! Friend help or not, you did an amazing job with this. Keep up the good work!
Live
Love
Be
Believe
Blessed be!
~Winter~
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This poem is very nice. I actually like the way it switches from rhyme; it keeps it from sounding robotic. The message is very beautiful and full of love, of course, haha.
I loved your background too!
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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Good poem... But you kept switching between not rhyming and rhyming... It kinda was wierd. My favorite part was:
Hold me close, Hold me tight,
But please don't ever lose sight.
Love me now like you loved me then,
Love me all the way to the end.
Close your eyes and let go of all
the pain you have bestowed.
Good luck in the contest.
De-Throne -
the flow is beautiful
it was gripping
i loved all of it ALL of it!!
ur a very good poet -
What a lovely poem. It was so emotional and wonderful. Keep the ink flowing and best of luck in the contest.
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oooo, too hard to read, after a long day this almost sent me blind...
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This is amazing and beautiful and passioniate!!!
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Great write here
Such vision and passion within this write Oh those days so far away when kisses were rainbows now faded away
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I am so sorry I forgot your little clappys
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this is an excellent poem that you have written. its so very romantic and very beautiful. I love the background that you have with your poem.. its beautiful, love the purple..
good luck in the contest.
kat -
Wonderful
A very romantic poem. Has a nice lyrical and enticing quality. Best of luck in the contest.
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