Caught up in the moment,
thinking about myself.
Yet at the same time,
i'm thinking of someone else.
It's hard to describe,
it's hard to comprehend.
A very confusing story,
about falling for a man.
I'm sick of being single,
sick of feeling alone.
I'm sick of wanting to cry,
and watching movies at home.
But he makes me happy,
I smile when he is around.
It can be such a sad day,
yet he'll still erase my frown.
I don't see his flaws,
he's just perfect you see.
I wish he would feel the same,
and maybe wanna date me.
Then I wouldn't be single,
I could be romantic and sappy.
I wouldn't be this lonely,
and I could finally be happy.
Author notes
This is about a guy I know really well.. I guess this poem is self-explanatory..
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I loved this piece of yours! Amazing! I loved the rhyme. I love the way you described your heart's emotions here. Beautiful flow throughout the poem. Good job! Thumbs up!
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Hmm, this is interesting,, if it was me, to fix the rhyme a little, in the 3rd stanza i would have said "at home" instead of "in my home", that makes a better flow. overall, its fine. -eleno
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Yes ..yes..yes..this is the heart and its desires ..bringing the hopes over the minds and over the expectation of life as well..it is quite natural..and yes this is love and the blessings of it are the only remedy for your sorrow..please go ahead..my best wishes..you did a beautiful work here reveling the sentiments of the heart..well done...
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From our conversation last night, I believe I know who this man is. Feel free to tell me if I'm wrong. I'll always be here for you Care.
Mucho love ya crazy chica,
Justin
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No, i think you got it about down pat. aka- you lol. I wrote that when we used to talk all the time.. but yeah nothing mushc has changed when it comes to those feelings
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