subculture sculptures from indigenous parts
common to despondent separations tossed
lose credit when passionate fervor departs
& beauty's blatant relevance becomes lost
previous to precious pandered conformity
warhol mingled with wild bohemians freely
drenched within soupy unique warped deformity
whilst blue innovations turned letters ideally
Author notes
markgrif
A contest entry
- Abstract PW allowed by BigE.
400 points, ended February 16, 2008, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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bravo!
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Beautiful. (:
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Love how you make me always get out the damn dictionary
Your words make me think so Its all good
Congrats on the bronze
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Wonderful Write
Now that I have had the chance to partake of this very interesting write I am going to gift myself some time and read some of your other works. I like not only the way you think but also they way you express yourself. There is a relevant freedom when one expresses with a dichotomous smile. You captivate your reader from the very first line...where you then seduce your reader in the most delightful way. Nothing in one sense ever really dies it just changes style…old is new then of course new is old then the reinvention of something everyone gleans forgotten I know kind of cliché my notion of interpretation Nevertheless darling wonderful write I appreciate your post very much indeed…my heartfelt thank you for this pondering moment congratulations on your win!
Lady E
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I like the moments of alliteration in this piece. The words just glide off the tongue. Well done
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HM
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Great verbiage in these lines-reminds me of the Energizer battery guy - just keeps on going and going. Congratulations on taking bronze in the contest.
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Thi shas a very nice flow to it, I Like it.
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Very good! Your poetry is very good, I can see you've practiced! Good luck in the contest!
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Very nice, I liked it a lot. The first two words started the poem off great, and captured my attention right away. Nicely done Can't really pick a favorite line, I like the whole thing equally...Very good job
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lol this was really good..ya know you should really think about doing a book..you would do awesome on it I believe.
Best of luck in the contest!
Kari
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This was made better because there's currently an Andy Worhol exhibition going on at the moment (slightly off topic, but for once, relevant).
You poetry always makes me want to curl up with a book of it in front of a fire and read until I fall asleep. You wouldn't happen to have a book hiding away in the works would you?
Irrelevance aside, this was stunning (as all your work is). I find you are one of the few poets who's work I can sink into and not be afraid of being consumed. Beautiful hun
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Thanks. Been thinking of the book thing.. Who knows.
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w00t!
Love it ~ & ain't it the truth, well on the upper side
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this is a wonderful write and holds so much within words. and i agree with your authors notes. best of luck bro
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Well thank you for actually reading the rules and following, you are the first to do so, so far and for that you get kudos.
As for the write I think it's VERY well written and very original.
I can see what you mean by true art is a dying art, and thank you for sharing. Thanks for entering. -
A truly kickin' piece of poetry, my friend
Wishing you the very best of luck in this contest!
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Awesome Write.
I am trying to come up with something for this lol.
Good luck
RedwingSpirit
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