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Love or Not

I stay awake at night often,

Thinking of what to do

Knowing that I love you with all my might

Then I remember that I don’t know what love is

My emotions are confused and unsure

I don’t know what to do sometimes

Should I not love no more?

Or should I go to sleep and not wake up?

My heart aches all the time

I feel like its gonna combust

Everyday passes as usual

While I wait for an answer to my question

Is it love? Or is it lust?

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 11, 2008
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    Welcome to All Poetry

    A most thoughtful piece indeed. I think only time will give you the answers you seek but waiting for that time to come can be very difficult. Thanks so much for sharing.
    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene


  • Dutch Doll
    January 10, 2008

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    very good, teen love sucks, i mean it is so powerful and all those emotions and what not just makes it tough. glad i am not in this stage of my life anymore. hope tings work out for you.