I am the forgotten weed
Lonesomely left, ground bound
Acquiescing to thoughts
Quietly crying
Forgotten
I am the single ray of darkness in your heart
Playing softly in the grass of light, tread lightly
I will consume you whole; without care
I'll do it slowly, with pleasure
I really don't mind; promise
Don't ask me why
You won't understand
Mind overtaker
Lost
I am the darkest thoughts of your soul
Fear me, I am your worst nightmare
I will taunt you by sleep
And by daunting day
Look for me
Lone Killer
Death
I am what no one wants
Cast out upon the street
Not a soul; dead
Left to die
Sorrow consumed
Abandoned
I am the song you can't forget
Never letting you rest; unending pain
In your head; always there
Ringing in your ears
I won't quit
Day ruined
Always
I am the one you love
I don't love you, sorry
You can't forget me
Don't even try
Always taunting
Withholder
I am what you desire
Can't get to me
Won't let you
Taunting tastes
Anger
I am your memories
What I hold
You fear
Forever
I am what you can't forget
I love to hurt
By your side
I stay
Reminding
I am your past
Forget me not
Reminding you
Love
I am...
Everything
Author notes
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3711428
Well I just kinda randomly wrote this. Hope you enjoy it. Hehe. And by the way, incase you don't see this. Each starting line of each stanza was a certain number of lines and I decreased one word each time. Just wanted to do something different than the usual rhyme.
"Earthquake! Duck!" Hehe.
A contest entry
- Write Me Your Best--- INVITE ONLY by daviscth.
6000 points, ended January 11, 2008, 33 entries
Gold trophy winner
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I know it's not great. But I like it. So don't bash... Just critque.
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an inventive and unique writer, not to mention good...i am glad that i am given the opportunity to read this, and congrats on the previous gold trophy -
Really good write. Really powerful and true. Very emotional. Well done and congrats for the contes
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This is my favorite out of all I've read
I love the devices you do to describe each feeling and emotion. Keep you the good work
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Nice.
I like it; the phrasing is done nicely, which brings the writing to the readers attention. There are some places where puntuation could be added. I'll admit it's not my favorite, but I do like it. Great job on imagry also.
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this is very nice poem good job on your trophy
love genna
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Thank you.
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Congratulations!
Well done!
Maureen
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Thank you.
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its awsome good job
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Thanks! Lol. I guess people liked this poem. I didn't think they would. My mistake.
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I did notice and thought this a very unique way to write something new. Thanks for posting this great piece, Cathy
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Thank you... In all honesty, I didn't think it was that great. Guess I was wrong. ^.^
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