I'm dizzy,
Ive been spinning around.
Cant focus my eyes,
I find myself on the ground.
Maybe i miss you,
Maybe you've been gone to long.
But no matter what,
I'm always wrong.
If i want you I'm wrong,
If i don't I'm mistaken.
Why do you try?
My heart You've already taken.
I cant breath,
Is that enough for you?
What more do you want,
Ive done all i can do.
I wish you wernt so much,
I cant handle you...
i wish it was easier,
To resist The things you do.
I wish It wasn't your touch,
That i cant help but crave,
Whats even worse,
Its what you gave.
Just step back,
This is not where i need to be.
So do me a favor,
Stop fucking with me.
A contest entry
- You have COMPLETE CREATIVE FREEDOM!!!!!!!! by Twosoulsasone.
465 points, ended January 23, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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I can totally relte to this, i feel this wat=y about someone in my life right now. Kind of a love hate, wanna be with you but dont think i can, but know i cant leave. Yup i know that feeling. Good Job. Thank you for entering.
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ick i hate it when this happens! I get so depressed and vulnerable. Good write girl and good luck in the contest. Much Love!
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It's a good poem. Love everything it's about.
But I hate it bc I relate to it too much... even though I think it's about something totally different.
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I love this! its deep and just wow! hope things work out for u! *hugs*
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