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Into Darkness

You dance in front on my pained face,
To the rhythm of your pain.
Here I stand in agony,
As your tears fall like the rains.

I offer a hand to ease the wounds,
But a solider, you deny.
Reaching out to destiny,
Why wont you comply.

Our love is deep, the magic wide,
But still my voice unheard.
My love for you has no end,
It flies like the morning’s bird.

You hear my cries, when life’s at fault,
You mend my every pain.
Why can I not help you,
Keep you cool and sane

Instead your anger rises,
Like the flame burning deep.
Instead of falling in our love,
Into darkness you seep.

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  • m2lost24get
    January 12, 2008
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    well done and even though the love and help we offer to share isnt returned and life seems darkened, the joy that evolves within the heart of their mere presense breathes new life into the soul even through tears. may time bring things better within hope. thank you for entering and many blessings always xx