Tightest grip
holding...
melting mother's
humbled hand
first time,
forever
Author notes
Prompt: It lasts forever
Inspiration: My beautiful newborn, Jesse Nathaniel- now 11 days old
In a list
A contest entry
- Super quick!!!!!!!!! # 2 by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 10, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful description of that precious moment, "first time, forever." Love the "melting mother's humbled hand." Pretty, soft alliteration.
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Wonderful! May your union be blessed beyond measure!
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I did not realize that Cupcrazy's contest was for your newborn son. Congratulations to you and your family. I wish you every happiness. You always find the essence of inspiration and do not use excess wording. The last three words are magic. I am particularly drawn to poems about birth and babies as I am expecting my first little one this summer. Congratulations on your gold trophy and you new son. Peace, Liz
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Oh, YAY, YAY, YAY for you!!!! I am thrilled for you. This will be the most beautiful summer of your life. There is absolutely nothing that compares to bringing new life into this world! So many congratulations to you. I hope to hear of your progress!!
Thanks for your kind words on my poem!
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Congrates On The Gold Sweet Soul!
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congrats on the trophy! a very well deserved one for such beauty in 10 words
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