Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The End

From within the area where nothing is audible,
I observe a beginning,
The birth of the future,
And out of the Gray,
Murk,
and
Must,
I crawl.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Arthuris
    January 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Great Movement

    This poem, like many, has something to say, but not only that... it moves as well. I think you'll find that short pieces can deliver much, and that more content requires more effort to deliver the same message. This is beautiful in its direction.