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Tender Glove

Toes curl,
on the feet,
swinging in time, 
exquisite beat,
playing music,
truest love,
fitting well,
a tender glove,
pearls of life,
given to purse,
past the gates,
soldiers disperse,
planting seed,
personally styled,
what was entered,
will exit a child.








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  • mcjb
    January 17, 2008
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    sensual, sexual, poetic, sweet and simple


  • Jalalbad gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    Penned like a pro.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    Interesting write here

    You have quite a unique poem here it is penned very well in what you saw in the pic goodluck in the contest