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I wanna kick this habit

"Your no good for me
but your the only one I see"
The words burn into
my skull
like a wild fire.
Why do I let myself
slip into madness
all for love?
Why do I lose my
control
and let my heart
take a masochistic
beating?
My love for you is so strong
but I know
what I can't have,
so why do I still want
just a taste of
sweet forbidden fruit

Author notes

"Stupid" by Sarah McLachlan

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  • Angel With No Halo
    February 1, 2008

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    Ahh... because that my dear is what love is.. and we all must make those mistakes. Great job writing for this. Thank you for your lovely entry

    ~Krys~


  • Morrigan Trinity
    January 10, 2008
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    Lovely, pet.
    No need to ask which fruit you speak of.
    Best of luck in the contest.