Never too deep
Never enough to die
Enough to feel,
The pain inside
Enough to make me feel alive
Shattered dreams
And constent lies
Hopeless soul
And silent cries
Desprate pleads
Just take me in
Forgive me for my line,
Of sin
My scars remind me
That the past is real
My blood releases,
A story that heals
Never too deep
Never enough to die
Enough too feel,
The pain inside
Author notes
....newest poem...just gotta feel it...theres no such thing as poetry block actually..when u feel it..let the pen do the talking
option 2
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- Childhood Memories by Funluvingrl16.
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Comments
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I don't really see what you are addicted to. there is not a lot of detail to the topic.. I thought it was a nice write though.
Rose -
This is so sad and you have done a nice job expressing some really painful feelings in this write. I am sorry these are your memories. We all deserve so much better than what we have gotten sometimes. Thanks for sharing this and for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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wow... really sad. I really liked this poem! Very well written too!
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I can feel the sad emotions in this poem, but why is there pain? Great write and best of luck.
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You did an excellent job with this it is very well written. Ilike it a lot,
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thank you for entering! this is a great write! you did a nice job! and good luck in the contest!
this also reminded me a lot of the song "Scars." because of the lines "My scars remind me
That the past is real" great, great poem though!
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i like this work. but i would have rather read it in center align.
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Love it.
I understand it... in a way. And I relate to your author note.. that is true... the pen lets your mind and soul, flow.
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i like this a whole lot..u shud let those things remain in the past...2morows another day =) dont let yesterday ruin it 4 u
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