Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Cotton Cushions thy Heart

Twinkles as diamonds,
within a pitch black sky.
Sleepless mind wanders,
graphic fears wet my eye.

Cotton clouds of night,
should cushion my heart.
Instead psyche darkens,
direct, from the start.

Sunset brings, drastic fears within.
Constant pleading, help me to strengthen.

(C) Nichole A.Dustin
  1/10/2008

Author notes

Prompt 10 lines...clouds of the night

A contest entry

My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • penman gold member
    January 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • CherryOnTop
    January 12, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    This is so intense and sad. But beautifully written. Good luck in the contest.