Darling, hello today
Can you help me, please?
I seem to have lost my way
Through all these falling leaves
Can't seem to find an exit
Can't seem to find a way
All I see is graying trees
Nightmares are on the way
Baby, how are you?
I'm not doing good
All this snow is falling
Taking with it good
I dig through the cold
Numbing memories
What happened to the warmth?
Fires now gone
Sweetheart, I missed you
Your face like summer's day
Shining through the emptyness
Putting warmth back inside me
I have found an exit
I have found a way
All I see is your face
Chasing my nightmares away
A contest entry
- Chaotic Poetry by Melodies.
600 points, ended January 11, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hello By Evanescence by XXCrimsonRaineXX.
1050 points, ended March 6, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i liked the flow, and the meaning behind this poem. how that one someone can find you and drag you out of even the darkest abyss. nice job.
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Oooooooooooooooooooooooooh! I like what you did here...
Sweet write and making me smile! You get a hug for this>>>> 
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