Your face still haunts me
in my dreams
it plays
like a favorite movie scene
playing over and over
Taunting me are memories
of what we had before
the way we loved
still leaves me wanting more
Will I ever be over you?
hopefully in time
til then I'll remain
a song with no rhyme
a broken heart
that can never mend
my love
for you will never end
A contest entry
- Pre-writes & Fresh Writes Welcome Here! by LadyUnique.
300 points, ended January 17, 2008, 65 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Why cant I get over you? by ISheHer.
387 points, ended February 29, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my prewrites by leander.
650 points, ended February 21, 2008, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I definately relate, but don't dwell it makes it take longer to give someone else a chance. Good luck, nice write
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I really like the lines:
"'till then I'll remain
a song with no rhyme".
the thought behind it and the way you've used them in a clever way really gives a unique and original touch to this poem
Getting over someone while you're still madly in love with that person is almost impossible to do, but sooner or later you'll learn to know someone else, and if it's the right person, you'll grow to him closer than you could ever imagine
Thanks for this entry as well!
Leander -
'till the I'll remain
a song with no rhyme'
i liked those lines
thanks for entering and best of luck
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very good
does flow like a song..very sad.
my fave verse..
Will I ever be over you?
hopefully in time
til then I'll remain
a song with no rhyme
thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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