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Rememberance

Passing glances, from
Love long since past. From
Eulogies of memory,
Altered by a
Second chance. A chance to risk
Everything? Or just

Remember, and play the game,
Even though the rules aren't fair.
Making
Everyone believe, love past, isn't there.
Melancholy lifts our hearts,
But felicity depresses.
Every dream we would
Remember, wastes away before our eyes.

Maybe someday we'll reunite. Until then love,
Every glance, is good-bye.

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  • Flying Phoenix
    June 17, 2008

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    This is one of the sadest love poems that I have read. It is beautifully written. Good luck in the contest


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Great write can really relate to this a lost love. Great line '
    "Maybe someday we'll reunite. Until then love,
    Every glance, is good-bye." Gives hope to a sad write.


  • Snow White Queen
    January 11, 2008
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    hey sis t his is beautiful!


  • Naznomarn
    January 10, 2008

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    I'm sure at least one person must have noticed by now. And they don't seem particularly forced.
    Very beautifully done.
    Seeing this, I'm sure they do every hour God allows.