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Only A Moment

I experienced a time
When I was happy once again;
The kid I used to be
Lifted up his head.
It lasted for a while
And while it did I smiled;
I felt just like a child.
But while the time went on
That my mind was clear,
I thought about my situation
And it made me fear.
My life seemed such a mess,
In my happy eyes, I guess
And those thoughts forced me back
It was a murderous attack.
So once again,

Like every other moment ends,
I'm beaten.

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  • DestiniesTwined
    February 24, 2008

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    This is really sad. I relate to it completely. It's a very good write. You expressed yourself well, and have much talent. Good job.


  • xeniaisme12
    January 11, 2008

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    thisis really good. im not sure what to say, i mean everyonefeelsdiffrent, but it gives you a sence of what your feeling, almost like we can see it like a movie....


  • likezoinks
    January 10, 2008

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    this poem made me think about when i was a kid. i used to be so happy and full of life. now everythings different.
    i love this! thanks for writing this.