My heart is like that glass around the jewel,
you don't need the insides to know what is there.
Love doesn't have to hurt.
A contest entry
- love doesnt have to hurt by B.bdawn.
300 points, ended February 8, 2008, 20 entries
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i didnt feel any emotional connection although perhaps that is not what you were trying to do. I liked the comparison to the glass and the jewel.
Keep up the amazing writing,
hddninshdws
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