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I Didn't Want To See It

I didn't want to see the look on your face,
when the words escaped me.
I really do hate you.

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  • volcaniclastic
    January 10, 2008

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    Wow. I said I loved you but I lied, indeed - even with so few words, I can see the whole hidden truth behind them. You rock, go you.

    Great write!


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    January 10, 2008

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    This is a powerful short piece kind of confused as to why exactly you wrote it for the prompt though it to me doesnt fit exactly


    • Yours-To-Have
      January 10, 2008
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      It was like the person wanted to say "i hate you" but they mixed up their emotions.