eyes of flame
hair the same
did not even know your name
left me feeling
left me reeling
left me up beyond the ceiling
could it be
could i see
anything in your eyes for me
got to go
answer is no
its over now let it be,
so.
Author notes
"oh" Tarcus
A contest entry
- I'll love you in the morning by j-ay rose.
722 points, ended March 25, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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interesting to say the least. it sounds like a one night stand which fits the criteria rather well. thank you for entering my contest.
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That was a fun little read. How much simpler can you say seeya? This left me optimistic, for some strange reason...great job!
Enough said,
Jin
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