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Closed my eyes and still I could see you
burned into my memory so completely -
it seems sometimes a wonder
I can function humanly at all.
Filled with your love
Maybe even your dismay
that this is all I can offer you
A bitter pill to swallow each day.
Do not ask me to close my eyes
I cannot forget you, I will not.

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Yeah, this sort of just fell into words. I've had a lot on my mind, dealing with my mother and so that's perhaps where this came from. I might add more later, but for now, this is all there is.

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  • il guardiano
    January 24, 2008

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    I would very much like to see you continue this piece should you ever feel the need. Very lovely work so far, my dear.